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Resume Grades 2 – Commission Salesman

June 23, 2015 by Joe Mabus

Another entry into our Resume Grades series. This time around we have an experienced commission based salesman.

Resume Grade 1 - Web Developer


What we like about it:

  • Great background with several well-known companies
  • Good education background

What could be improved:

  • More description of work related duties and job titles
  • Writer should have more specific examples of success, including data and metrics
  • Awards section is a good idea, but should only be listed if awards are relevant to application


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