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Resume Grades 3 – Director of Retail Sales

July 7, 2015 by Joe Mabus

Another fantastic entry into our resume grades series. This resume features a Director level professional who manages retail sales.

Resume Grade 1 - Web Developer


What we like about it:

  • Clear career progression which shows increasing responsibility
  • Resume uses numbers frequently and documents continued success

What could be improved:

  • Recent roles could show more detail of specific accomplishments
  • Bullet points need to use grammar more consistently, i.e. start every point with a present tense action verb
  • Formatting is unusual in a few places and could be spaced more thoughtfully to improve readability


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