Another fantastic entry into our resume grades series. This resume features a Director level professional who manages retail sales.
What we like about it:
- Clear career progression which shows increasing responsibility
- Resume uses numbers frequently and documents continued success
What could be improved:
- Recent roles could show more detail of specific accomplishments
- Bullet points need to use grammar more consistently, i.e. start every point with a present tense action verb
- Formatting is unusual in a few places and could be spaced more thoughtfully to improve readability